A cold wind crawled across the stone basin, where I stood shirtless beneath a dim sun. My breath curled from my lips like smoke from a forging flame. Behind me, jagged cliffs cast long shadows across the smithing ground I had carved with my own hands — a forge not of legacy, but necessity.
I had come here to build something beyond a weapon.
The philosophy of Flash Cut had changed me. It had burned into my soul an immutable truth: anything can be the sword. The hand. The shield. The will.
I had learned it the hard way — bloodied palms, broken swords, and mind-numbing exhaustion from wielding a technique that devoured more than just energy. Flash Cut wasn't just speed. It was a commitment. A metaphysical equation where every stroke risked total collapse if the spirit wavered.
But I didn't collapse.
I grew sharper. Wiser. Hungrier.
And in the silence of the highlands, away from politics and assassins, I began crafting my answer to the chaos: a sword that wasn't just a blade.
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"Why only wield one form?" I had asked myself weeks ago, as I studied shattered hilts and melted fragments from my failed prototypes. "Why not forge a weapon that becomes the form I need?"
Thus, the vision for Beteraxe was born.
Named after an ancient term lost in the sands of pre-imperial Veyrax, Beteraxe meant "the breath of the fighting god." A weapon that could inhale war and exhale peace — a tool of clarity amid violence. Not dominance. Not cruelty. But understanding.
It started as a single slab of memory-steel — an alloy fused with Starcore resonant dust, making it reactive to will and flexible to energy imprints. Forging such material required more than heat.
I spoke to it.
Not in words. In focus.
The furnace glowed white-blue, powered by the miniature Starcore embedded in its base. The heat warped the air, and clad in reinforced gloves and sealed visor, I held the metal with reverence.
My mind channeled Flash Cut's passive flow — not to slice, but to shape.
Hours turned into days. Days into weeks.
I engraved energy guidance veins into the blade's spine using a laser-etched magnetic stylus, each stroke representing a form of combat — Shield Mode, Sword Mode, Saber/Rapier Mode. The triangular core piece that would mount on my right forearm was carved with intricate geometric will-runes, designed to tether with the Firstborn armor interface I hadn't yet built.
Yet the sword came first.
Always the sword first.
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By the end of the second month, Beteraxe was complete.
In Shield Mode, it appeared as a simple, compact triangle of metal strapped to my forearm. But with a twist of wrist and a breath of will, the core would reshape:
Into a short sword of perfect balance and weight, hugging the forearm like a predator ready to strike.
Or into a rapier — the blade elongating, narrowing, focusing the energy into piercing force.
I tested it not in mock duels, but through meditation forms passed down from the ghost instructors of Veyrax's ruined libraries. Each movement carved trails of heated air, whispering past stones.
Flash Cut responded to Beteraxe differently. It didn't destabilize — it resonated.
Why?
Because Beteraxe was made not just to survive Flash Cut, but to understand it.
"A sword is not a tool of destruction," I muttered under my breath, quoting an old master whose name history had erased. "It is a measure of one's heart."
And my heart was ready to measure.
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On the final day of forging, I stood beneath the midnight sky, Beteraxe strapped in Shield Mode.
I faced a mountain wall of steel slabs, a test chamber I had constructed earlier. My eyes narrowed.
No crowd. No song. No pageantry.
Just one breath.
I activated Flash Cut — just partially — and struck.
The entire wall split, not just cleaved, but displaced, as if reality around the steel bent for an instant and reformed too late to resist.
The blow drained my stamina by half. But I remained standing. My eyes flicked to Beteraxe — its edge still cool, its shield form automatically retracting into passive stance.
I smiled.
It was a good sword.
No, it was the right sword.
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I sheathed Beteraxe into its core bracket, sat cross-legged on the stone, and stared at the stars.
Above me, the galaxy stretched wide — cold, beautiful, full of death and destiny.
Somewhere, Eastborn still ruled the eastern reach.
Somewhere, assassins still looked for my name on bounty boards.
Somewhere, my friends still feared what I would become.
But none of that mattered right now.
Right now, I had a sword. A breath. A will.
And that was enough.
But I knew it wouldn't stay that way.
Eastborn was rising — half-blood royal, armed with Exosword tech and burning ambition. He wouldn't let me rise unchallenged. And I… I wouldn't kneel.
Our destinies would collide soon.
So I trained.
I meditated. Sharpened.
And prepared the foundation for what would come next — the Firstborn Armor.
But that… that is another tale.
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[To be continued in Chapter 10: The Rift of Blood and Legacy]
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Chapter 9: The Breath Forged in Silence
A cold wind crawled across the stone basin where I stood, shirtless beneath a dim sun. My breath curled from my lips like smoke rising from a forging flame. Behind me, jagged cliffs cast long shadows across the smithing ground I had carved with my own hands — a forge born not of legacy, but of necessity.
I had come here to build something beyond a weapon.
The philosophy of Flash Cut had changed me. It had etched into my soul an immutable truth: anything can be the sword. The hand. The shield. The will.
I learned it the hard way — through bloodied palms, shattered blades, and the mind-numbing exhaustion of wielding a technique that devoured more than energy. Flash Cut wasn't just speed. It was commitment. A metaphysical equation where every stroke risked collapse if the spirit faltered.
But I didn't collapse.
I grew sharper. Wiser. Hungrier.
And in the silence of the highlands, far from politics and assassins, I began crafting my answer to chaos: a sword that wasn't just a blade.
---
"Why wield only one form?" I had asked myself weeks ago, studying shattered hilts and melted fragments from my failed prototypes. "Why not forge a weapon that becomes the form I need?"
Thus, the vision for Beteraxe was born.
Named after an ancient term lost in the sands of pre-imperial Veyrax, Beteraxe meant the breath of the fighting god — a weapon that could inhale war and exhale peace. Not for dominance. Not for cruelty. But for clarity. Understanding.
It began as a single slab of memory-steel, fused with Starcore resonant dust — an alloy reactive to will and flexible to energy imprints. Forging such material demanded more than heat.
I spoke to it.
Not in words, but in focus.
The furnace burned white-blue, powered by the miniature Starcore embedded in its base. Heat shimmered the air, and clad in reinforced gloves and a sealed visor, I held the metal with reverence.
My mind channeled Flash Cut's passive flow — not to slice, but to shape.
Hours became days. Days, weeks.
I etched energy guidance veins into the blade's spine using a laser-etched magnetic stylus. Each stroke encoded a form: Shield Mode, Sword Mode, Saber/Rapier Mode. The triangular core piece, destined to mount on my forearm, was carved with intricate geometric will-runes, designed to tether with the Firstborn armor interface — which remained only a concept.
But the sword came first.
Always the sword first.
---
By the end of the second month, Beteraxe was complete.
In Shield Mode, it appeared as a simple, compact triangle strapped to my forearm. But with a twist of the wrist and a breath of will, the core reshaped:
Into a short sword, balanced and precise, hugging my forearm like a predator ready to strike.
Or into a rapier, elongated and focused, channeling energy into a piercing whisper of death.
I didn't test it in duels, but through meditation forms passed down by the ghost instructors of Veyrax's ruined libraries. Each motion carved trails of heated air, whispering over the stone.
Flash Cut responded differently to Beteraxe. It didn't destabilize — it resonated.
Why?
Because Beteraxe wasn't just made to withstand Flash Cut. It was made to understand it.
"A sword is not a tool of destruction," I whispered, recalling an old master whose name had been swallowed by time. "It is a measure of one's heart."
And my heart was ready to be measured.
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On the final day of forging, I stood beneath a moonless sky, Beteraxe strapped in Shield Mode.
Before me rose a mountain wall of steel slabs — a test chamber I had constructed long before I knew if this moment would come. My eyes narrowed.
No audience. No anthem. No ceremony.
Just one breath.
I activated Flash Cut — partially — and struck.
The entire wall split, not simply cleaved, but displaced, as if reality had warped and reformed too late to resist the blow.
Half my stamina vanished in an instant. But I remained standing. I looked to Beteraxe — its edge still cool, retracting calmly into Shield Mode.
I smiled.
It was a good sword.
No — it was the right sword.
---
I sheathed Beteraxe into its core bracket, sat cross-legged on the stone, and gazed at the stars.
Above me, the galaxy stretched wide — cold, vast, beautiful. Full of death and destiny.
Somewhere, Eastborn still ruled the eastern reach.
Somewhere, assassins still searched bounty boards for my name.
Somewhere, my friends still feared what I might become.
But none of that mattered now.
Right now, I had a sword. A breath. A will.
And that was enough.
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But none of that mattered now.
Right now, I had a sword. A breath. A will.
And that was enough.
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The wind rose again, carrying the scent of distant ash and snow. I closed my eyes and listened. There was a silence here that I could not find in the cities — not the quiet of peace, but the stillness of decision. Every echo from the cliffs was my own reflection, thrown back at me a thousand times.
Would I stay here?
Could I?
The forge had become a sanctum. But a sword is not made to rest on its altar.
Even now, as I sat beneath the stars, I felt the pulse of distant conflict. Not through news, or whispers, but through instinct. The kind of instinct born from being hunted too long. Somewhere out there, Somewhere out there, Varkil, the war-forger of the old southern campaigns, was gathering steel and loyalty for a rebellion I couldn't yet understand. was gathering steel and loyalty for a rebellion I couldn't yet understand. Somewhere out there, the Eastborn Enclave tightened its grip on the fractured continent, turning provinces into prisons.
And somewhere deep in my chest, that old fire began to stir again.
I reached out and pressed my fingers against the cold metal of Beteraxe. Its surface shimmered slightly at my touch, reacting to my presence — a sign of the will-bond forming stronger with every hour.
I spoke, not aloud, but inwardly.
"Soon."
Because I knew what came next.
Forging the sword had been a trial.
Wielding it would be a war.
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Later that night, I returned to the forge one last time. Not to craft, but to leave something behind — an imprint. I knelt beside the furnace, its heat long faded, and carved a single rune into the stone with the tip of Beteraxe.
It read: "BREATH BECOMES FURY."
A message for anyone who might stumble upon this place.
A warning.
A truth.
Then I turned, strapped on my travel mantle, and began descending the mountain path.
Snow had started to fall.
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And so the silent chapter ended, not with a battle cry, but with the whisper of footsteps on stone. The world waited below — fractured, brutal, alive. And in my hand, I carried more than steel.
I carried the breath of something new.
Something not yet understood.
Something the world would either embrace…
…or break itself trying to stop.
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