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Chapter 1 - hibatba.

"why are your eyes so creepy" a lanky boy with blonde hair asks.

"uhm well I'm apart of the hyuu-" but she gets rudley interrupted by another boy.

"oh your part of a clan are all their eyes as ugly as yours?" A fat boy with relitively short brown hair asks.

"t-thats really mean my cl-" but she is interrupted again.

"oh getting scared now I have never seen an arrogant clan folk yet scared by some civilians before" boy 3 says getting a little smug.

He just looks ordinary average height face everything.

"oh I just have some trouble getting some words out for some reason" the girl says.

oh you think your better than us just like those other clan folks!" boy 2 asks.

"no I just-" but she is rudley interrupted again.

"shut up you creepy eyed clan member!" boy 1 shouts.

This causes the hyuuga girl to flinch a little.

"look at you flinching at the slightest movement pathetic" boy 3 says.

Tears start forming in the girls eyes while shivering.

"hey that's not nice" a blond boy runs up and reprimands the boys.

"whats not nice is this little creepy eyed girl saying she's better than us" boy 1 snorts.

"you could have just left then no need to entertain her" the blond boy says.

"eh but I wasn't looking down on them I just have a little stutter and apart of the hyuuga clan" the hyuuga girl says.

"is that true?" The blond boy asks the boys.

"she didn't say it directly but she meant- no wait I don't have anything to explain to you I'm an academy student" boy 1 says.

"what is being an academy student have to do with anything it looks like your bullying this poor girl because of your inferiority complex' the blond says.

"shut up I don't even know what that means" boy 1 says.

The blond boy just stares at him not impressed.

"well show you" the three boys say simultaneously.

"stop!" The girl tries to break them up but gets pushed to the side.

"hey" the blond boy not tolerating bullying charges at them.

The academy boys split up and surround the blonde boy.

The blonde boy charges at one of them but one puts his foot out trying to trip him.

The blonde boy hooks the boys legs with his foot and pulls him towards him and punches him in the nose.

That gets the other boys mad so they charge at him.

The fatter boy throws a punchwhich the blonde boy blocks but staggers a bit.

The lanky boy punches him in the back of his neck making the blond boy wince in pain.

The average boy sees his opportunity and charges at the boy.

But his shirt gets grabbed by the hyuuga girl. The hyuug girl palms him in the face knocking him out cold.

The fat boy knowing they don't stand a chance against the two of them makes a desperate play.

The fat boy grabs the blond's scarf and breaks it in half. As a desperate decision to make the boy pay.

The lanky boy seeing this also goes for the scarf and tears it up.

"NO!" The blonde boy screams and gets up to his feet.

He wastes no time jumping up and kneeing the fat boy in his nose knocking him out.

He winds up a punch as strong as he can and hits the lanky boy in his stomach.

The lanky boy coughs up blood and gets knocked out.

"uhm are you okay?" The hyuuga girl asks.

"m-my scarf" the blonde boy weakly says.

"im sorry for the inconvenience I'll replace the-" the hyuuga girl tries to apologise but is interrupted.

"nah it's cool it's just a stupid scarf by the way I'm Naruto" the boy revealing himself to be Naruto says.

"oh I'm hinata but I've gotta repa-" but she's interrupted again.

"nah it's good see you around hibaba" Naruto announces and runs off.

"hinata" the girl weakly says but a small smile is forming on her face.

...

"how was it?" Hiashi asks.

"mediocore sir she let the bullies trample all over until the jinchuriki came in and she only knocked out one boy the jinchuriki got the other two" hinatas guard reveals.

"dammit a weak and timid heir will not stand call my wife we've got another child to make" hiashi says.

"as you wish clan head" the guard flickers away.

...

Naruto (3)

Man what a bunch of jerks picking on a girl just... Uhh.

Wait I didn't hear the full story dammit.

Whatever I'm sure I still did the right thing I could sense her fear and the bullies malice.

I've had this ability since I could remember reading people's emotions and how strong they are.

It honestly feels like an invasion of privacy to me but gotta use what you can do.

My caretaker doesn't allow me to go outside much for whatever reason.

The other kids don't talk to me they are scared of me for some reason and the caretaker is also scared of me.

Well everyone is really I tried going out to make some friends but the parents whispered about how km dangerous and I'm a demon.

Aren't demons supposed to be tall demonic beings tho.

I just look like a normal kid well with whiskers but whatever. Some feral looking people with dogs have red marks on their faces.

It's honestly kinda lonely out here. They don't do anything to me they just stare whisper and run away when I come close.

They don't hit me or anything but I kinda wish they did. I mean feeling pain isn't all that bad.

And I don't think it's as bad as kit having any interaction like ever.

Gramps told me about ninjas and about how they are respected and all that.

Especially the homage the sing praises wherever he walks. And guess what Gramps is the hokage.

Yeah the hokage taking extra attention at me I must have something incredible. Maybe it's how I sense all the energy and emotions.

But I haven't told anyone yet and I don't really plan on doing so. I'll reveal it Infront of everyone at an extra cool moment.

But Gramps only comes once a month so I can't ask him about how to become hokage.

...

"gramps" Naruto starts.

"yes Naruto" hiruzen asks.

"how do I become hokage and respected" Naruto asks with childlike happiness.

"well the first step is becoming a strong ninja and training everyday, I've already enrolled you at the academy so don't worry about that" hiruzen says.

"the academy when will I go there?" Naruto asks inpatient as ever.

"when you turn six of course" hiruzen says.

"wait that's 3... Uhm 4, 5 and six.. three years!" Naruto shouts.

"remeber young Naruto a shinobi must be patient" hiruzen says.

"but it's gonna take so long can't you teach me early?" Naruto asks.

"well I guess I can teach you a jutsu or two" hiruzen says.

"wait really? Thank you GRAMPS!" Naruto shouts not having his requests answered all that much.

"first we should test your chakra affinity" hiruzen hands him the chakra affinity paper and explains so s basic things about the elements.

"cool I want ever chakra nature" Naruto announces.

Hiruzen chuckles "saying you want it won't make it happen and it's very for that to happen"

Naruto inserts his chakra into the paper and it gets cut in half.

The two halves become wet.

"two natures not b-" hiruzen stops his praise and looks shocked.

The two halves get engulfed in got fire burning the previously wet paper leaving nothing left.

"is that bad Gramps?" Naruto asks.

"no it's not young Naruto come I'll explain the jutsu I'm about to teach you." Hiruzen says but internally his screaming.

'that looked artificial fake and demonic the jinchuriki kid wouldn't do this so the only explanation is the nine tails.' Hiruzen thinks.

"the wind jutsu I'm going to teach you is called breakthrough you shoot out a gust of wind from your mouth it's E-rank" hiruzen explains.

"cool shooting wind from my mouth I'm definitely going to be the strongest ninja in no time" Naruto announces.

To that hiruzen just chuckles.

Name: breakthrough

Rank:E

Description: the user fires a gust of wind from their mouth capable of knocking opponents down and bending trees but since it's E-rank that's the max potential for this justu.

It's an Inferior version of the C-rank great breakthrough.

...

'hm he did that on the first attempt good looks like minato left behind a genius son' hiruzen thinks.

"very good Naruto your very talented but don't let this go to your head your wasting a lot of chakra doing this" hiruzen says.

"but my chakra doesn't feel drained at all" Naruto says.

"well you do have a lot of chakra and this is only an E-rank but if you keep wasting chakra like that your jutsu might not work"hiruzen explains.

"oh okay Gramps" Naruto says.

"the next jutsu I'm going to teach you is called the flame jutsu it's also E-rank"

Name:flame

Rank:E

Description: the user fires of a small fire ball out of their mouth the size of a basketball since it's just an E-rank that's the limit to its size. Otherwise the fire will wither away.

It's an Inferior version of the C-ranl fire ball jutsu.

...

"first try again good job Naruto" hiruzen praises him. To which Naruto just beams with a smile.

"but again your wasting too much chakra too little of it is going to the jutsu but good thing you have such large chakra" Naruto just nods at the criticism.

"next justu one the agenda is the wave justu." Hiruzen explains

"lemme guess it's also E-rank" Naruto says.

"your quite right about it's rank but be grateful not many people even learn a jutsu before the academy" hiruzen says.

"okay Gramps thanks for this opportunity" Naruto says.

Name:wave

Rank:E

Description: an Inferior version of the C-rank jutsu wild water wave. The user spits out a blob of water the size of a football capable of knocking down opponents.

Since is just an E rank it can't get any larger than a basketball otherwise the water will dissolve.

...

"firts try again your almost as talented as me" hiruzen compliment.

'i would have probably gotten them on the first try too since their E-rank' hiruzen thinks.

"lemme guess, your still using wasting too much chakra young Naruto" Naruto says adoption hiruzens way of speaking.

To that hiruzen just chuckles.

"but your saying I'm wasting too much chakra but aren't teaching me not how actually use chakra correctly" Naruto says.

"well I guess you're right none of my previous students had this problem anyway the way to not waste chakra is to pick up a leaf and make it stick to your skin with chakra" hiruzen explains.

"wait student's?" Naruto asks.

"another time Naruto, another timeive got things to handle see you next month"

Hiruzen flickers away.

...

Naruto.

Man it's this day I'd so boring Gramps is gone so I've lost the only interaction I'll get for the Month.

I should go out again I'm sure there's some kids who haven't heard of me.

...

Hinata

"oh hey hibaba" Naruto greeted the hyuuga girl.

"oh Naruto I haven- wait it's hinata" hinata says.

"oh right sorry I'm bad with names, anyway wanna hang out?" Naruto asks.

"i would love that" hinata says with a small smile.

...

Hinata

"oh that plant looks like a jerry" Naruto points to another plant.

Wow Naruto is not well received well... Anywhere.

Everyone is whispering and staring at him moving away when he comes close. And this doesn't seem to bother him.

Is he used to it?poor soul.

I lean closer to him and grab his arm. He must not have much interaction or contact with people.

"how about we go to the forest to look at more plants" I say trying to get him away from all the hostile stares.

"ohh that sounds like a good idea and I would be able to touch the plants" Naruto says.

...

"dont touch that!" I shout that cactus is poisonous enough to knock out a lion.

He touched it...

"what are you so scared about look it doesn't do anything"

Wait was the book wrong it's safe to touch?

"i read a book saying that cactus is poisonous enough to knock out a lion but guess it was wrong"

"this is why I don't read books just a bunch of made up things old people use to trick us" Naruto says with full confidence.

I stare at him.

"most books are actually correct Naruto but I guess the one I read was wrong I guess"

"but I once read a book about the body and it said people need days to heal a slash wound but iwas fine in a couple of minutes" Naruto says.

Maybe he's talking about a paper cut.

"are you talking about paper cuts or something else?"

"no a huge dog but me in my arm a month ago there was blood everywhere and I could see my bones and nerves" Naruto says.

"show me the arm" I say sternly.

"uhm okay?" He answers.

Good there's no scarring or anything dangerous.

"i guess you're just built different I guess but be careful with ... Dogs I guess"

"whats wrong hibaba it will all heal in time anyway" Naruto says.

This kinda gets me mad for some reason.

"you-"

..

"you-" hinata stops whatever she was about to say and stares shocked.

A man covered up in some military clothes to blend in with the snow just came and drive a kunai to Narutos neck.

His target seems to be hinata because he pockets his kunai and rushes towards her.

But before that hinata bodyguard comes out of the forest and clashes with the men.

But Naruto gets up before that with the stab wound on his neck healed.

"how about a little deal you give me the girl and I spare your live you look like a chuunin but I'm an elite jounin" the jounin says.

"yeah right like any shinobi would honour their word and it's my duty to protect her" the hyuuga says.

'yeah right if I ran away right now hiashi will do way worse things to me than just simple death' the guard thinks.

The jounin takes out his sword and takes a stance.

The hyuuga activates his byakugan anddoes a stance.

They start a physical exchange which the jounin was obviously winning. The hyuuga had several gash wounds on his body and was breathing heavily.

'dammit there's no reinforcements coming I can see some people maintaining some type of barrier I'm cooked' the hyuuga whines.

The jounin kickes the hyuuga away and coats his sword with lightning chakra. He charges at the downed hyuuga ready to take the kill.

But before that Naruto shoots out a basket ball sized ball of wind towards the jounin. And a large number of needles water is thrown at him at the same time by the anbu protecting Naruto.

The anbu did not reveal themselves even when Naruto got stabbed. Judging that the boy was fine and that even if he and the hyuuga teamed up they could not defeat the jounin.

He bided for his time until he was the perfect opportunity and unleashed his greatest technique.

Naruto having already healed the stab wound stayed down and also bided for his time for the perfect moment.

Sensing the battle and waiting for his chance. He slowly did the handsibgs for the flame jutsu and timed it with the anbu.

The conclusion? The jounin was stabbed by the needles and burned by the fire. The water and fire clashes making an extremely it hot and steamy.

The jounin could not breathe, he was being burned and the water needles stabbed his organs.

I a couple of seconds he was dead.

"hell yeah!" Naruto screams completely forgetting they are still in a dangerous situation.

"watch out three more foes all of them chuunin level hostile and preparing jutus!" The hyuuga shouts.

A spear of lighting , a pheonix made lighting and a web of lighting all raining down on all of them.

The hyuuga/anbu immediately flickers to their respective protectee.

The anbu fires a flare towards the sky but one of the chuunin weaves hand sings and spits out a bullet of water from their mouths.

Engulfing the flare in water and neutralisng it.

The chuunin directly charges at the anbu while his teammates throw kunai at the anbu.

The anbu throws Naruto away and fights the chuunin with his kunai.

The hyuuga immediately tries to run away with hinata not caring if Naruto and the anbu die. But before he can get far away one of the chuunin stans him in the back and tries to grab hinata.

The hyuuga does not not flinch and strikes a tenketsu point in the chuunin hand and kicks him away.

The barrage of kunai stop against the anbu as the chuunin charges towards hinata.

But before he can get close a roar escapes Narutos mouth.

"DON'T TOUCH HIBABA!" Naruto screams his eyes red and his pupils slitted charges towards the chuunin and lands a kick to the chin.