Here's Chapter 23 — blending mystery, light comedy, growing friendships, and a bit of that dark adventure build-up you love. Enjoy the pacing and setup as the story deepens!
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Chapter 23 – The Golden Letter and the Whispering Woods
The sun had just begun to fall behind the horizon when a golden letter shimmered into existence above Elric's bed.
It didn't fall.
It hovered.
Glowed.
And hummed softly with power.
Rue was the first to notice.
"Elric," she said, pointing. "Did you get mail… from the gods?"
"I hope it's not another 'Congratulations on Being a Chosen One' letter," he groaned, snatching it out of the air.
> To: Elric, Shepherd Class
From: Grandmaster Harrow – Academy of Paths & Beasts
Subject: Trial Invitation – Whispering Woods
You are hereby summoned to participate in your first official Field Trial. This is not optional.
Location: Sector 3 – The Whispering Woods
Group Assignment: You will be assigned a team of your choice. Up to 4 members.
Warning: This trial involves spiritual beasts and emotion-reactive illusions. Weak-minded students have… failed.
Reward: Unknown. Hidden. Glorious.
Elric blinked. "Emotion-reactive illusions? Are they trying to mess with my trauma or my ego?"
"Both," Lira said dryly. "And I'm joining."
Glen flexed. "Same. If there's danger, I punch it."
Rue nodded. "I need rare herbs from that forest."
Elric grinned. "Perfect. Team 'Probably Going to Die' is go."
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System Notification
> You've accepted the Field Trial: [Whispering Woods].
Recommended Level: 5+
Current Level: 4
Warning: Enemies may include Spirit Beasts, Illusion Phantoms, and Echo Fiends.
Beast Bond Protection Active.
> Tip: Certain rare beast cores and emotional relics can only be found in illusion-type dungeons.
Oh, and Elric? Don't die.
That's an order, not a joke.
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That Night – Preparation Time
They sat in the academy dining hall going over their limited gear.
"No fire scrolls," Rue muttered.
"No light arrows," Glen added.
"No problem," Elric said confidently. "Because I have… this!"
He held up a ragged bag.
"…That's your laundry," Lira said.
He quickly shoved it back. "Wrong bag."
"System," he whispered. "Please tell me we have something useful."
> Shop unlocked: Trial Category – Limited Time Items.
[Phantom Ward Talisman] – 25 SP
[Anti-Illusion Eye Drop] – 5 SP
[Temporary Beast Collar] – 30 SP
[Soulbread] – 1 SP each (Restores minor mental energy)
You have 48 System Points.
Elric bought two talismans and a bunch of soulbread.
Just in case.
Because in his experience, if something sounded like a peaceful illusion trial…
…it probably meant mind-eating ghosts.
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Before the Journey
The next morning, their small group approached the large teleportation circle outside the academy gates.
They weren't the only ones. Dozens of other students, all in small teams, all carrying fear and hope behind their eyes.
Whispers passed.
"There's that Shepherd kid."
"He tamed a storm beast, right?"
"Who cares? This trial eats emotions. Even dragons cry in there."
Elric smirked. "Good. I plan to make it cry back."
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System Notification
> Field Trial [Whispering Woods] Begins in 3... 2... 1…
Light surged.
The world vanished in a silent flash—
—and Elric found himself standing in a silver forest, where the trees whispered ancient memories and fog danced like ghosts.
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End of Chapter 23
Next: Chapter 24 – Trial of Echoes
Strange visions.
Emotional beasts.
A rare egg hidden deep within a twisted dream.
Here's Chapter 24 — diving into the surreal forest trial, emotion-reactive illusions, and early mystery tension. Let's go deeper into worldbuilding and character dynamics.
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Chapter 24 – Trial of Echoes
The Whispering Woods were nothing like the stories.
No birds. No wind.
Just… whispers. Constant, low, and wordless, brushing against Elric's thoughts like a memory half-remembered.
Every step they took, the fog pulsed around their boots. The silver trees shimmered under invisible light. The air tasted like fear… and nostalgia.
> System Notification
Trial Effect Active: [Emotional Fog – Layer I]
Mental resistance reduced. Illusions may react to your strongest hidden emotion.
Note: Your heartbeat is rising. Try not to panic.
Tip: Emotional clarity boosts resistance.
Elric muttered, "Thanks for the anxiety update, bestie."
> You're welcome. I'm rooting for you to cry dramatically in public.
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Their First Encounter
A rustle.
Glen tensed, fists glowing faintly. "Movement."
From behind a tree, a small, pale beast emerged. No fur, no claws. Just round, soulless eyes and a child-like body.
A spirit-type creature—yet it smiled as if it recognized them.
Rue whispered, "It's a Lesser Echo Fiend. Level 6. Illusion specialist."
The creature took a step forward, and—
BOOM!
A new world surged around them.
Suddenly, Elric was back in his old world.
On Earth.
Alone.
Weak.
Hooked to machines.
His family blurred, and that familiar beep echoed—
> System Warning
High illusion interference detected. Anchoring host.
Activating Passive Skill: [Reality Pulse I]
Mental clarity restored by 25%.
FLASH.
The fog shattered. The beast screeched and stumbled.
Lira's arrow pierced its neck. Glen punched through its chest.
> Echo Fiend defeated.
+120 EXP
Item Dropped: [Echo Core Fragment] x1
Item Dropped: [Flickering Beast Egg – Illusion Type]
You have leveled up to Level 5!
New Skill Unlocked: [Beast Sense I]
(Passively scans nearby beasts, reveals danger tier and rare loot potential.)
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Elric's Eyes Glow Blue Briefly
Rue stared. "Your eyes just changed color."
"Yeah," Elric said casually. "I think my brain downloaded a beast radar."
> [Beast Sense I] activated: Nearby beast detected – Tier: Uncommon. Type: Empathic Illusion. Level Gap: 2.
Advice: Caution. Not all beasts are hostile. Some wish to bond.
The flickering egg pulsed softly in Elric's hands.
The System whispered again, gentler this time.
> Would you like to bind the [Flickering Beast Egg]?
This egg responds to loneliness. It may hatch faster if kept close.
Bonding cost: 10 SP
Elric grinned. "Confirm."
> Bond complete. Egg added to Beast Pouch. Estimated hatching: 3 days.
Emotional signature detected: compatible.
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Deeper Into the Fog
Their team advanced. The forest became more abstract. Trees looked like people from their past. Some were crying. Others were burning.
"Don't listen," Lira said, gripping her weapon tightly. "This trial isn't about monsters. It's about regrets."
Elric's voice dropped low. "Good thing I've made peace with mine."
> Lie Detected.
Emotional Storm Approaching.
A gust of fog surged, and a figure stepped out.
Not a beast.
Not a person.
But himself—a twisted, broken version of Elric, scarred, desperate, eyes filled with grief.
The illusion spoke with a smile.
> "You can't protect anyone. You're still that dying kid in a hospital bed."
--Here's Chapter 25 with the simplified direction—straightforward beast encounters, comedy, and Elric's shameless, fun system-powered growth!
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Chapter 25 – Beast Hunt Begins!
"Alright, squad!" Elric clapped his hands like a coach who had absolutely no plan. "Time for some beast bashing and loot farming. System, give me a radar ping."
> [Beast Sense I] Activated
Nearby Threats Detected:
Wild Tuskhorn (Level 6) – Aggressive, Earth Type
Flutter Fang (Level 4) – Fast, Air Type
Mossback Turtle (Level 7) – Defensive, Water Type
Danger: Moderate
Loot Potential: High
"Perfect," Elric smirked. "A tank, a speedster, and a brute. My favorite breakfast combo."
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Beast 1: Wild Tuskhorn
They reached a small clearing. Trees were snapped like twigs. A hulking boar, taller than a wagon, snorted as it dug at the earth with stone-covered hooves. Its tusks glowed faintly.
"That's a Tuskhorn," Rue whispered. "Weak to lightning, strong against frontal attacks."
Elric: "So we hit it from the back?"
Lira: "…Can you not make it sound weird?"
> Battle Start!
Elric used Skill: [Shock Pulse I]
Weakness hit! Tuskhorn stunned.
BOOM—Glen charged and punched the beast square in the jaw. Lira followed up with a blade slash to its leg.
> Wild Tuskhorn Defeated!
+190 EXP
Loot: [Tuskhorn Hide] x2, [Rough Earth Core]
Beast Info Updated to Bestiary.
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Beast 2: Flutter Fang
Ten minutes later, a buzz filled the air.
A massive flying insect zipped by. Its wings shimmered like glass, and it darted between trees with ridiculous speed.
"Flutter Fang. Level 4," Glen called. "Hard to hit, but weak to fire."
Elric pulled a spicy-looking berry from his pouch.
Lira blinked. "What is that?"
"Fire Fruit. I enchanted it with [Spark Touch]. Now… fetch, bug boy!"
He tossed it like a grenade.
> Flutter Fang is lured!
*Boom! Direct hit.
Flutter Fang Defeated!
+80 EXP
Loot: [Lightwing Membrane], [Tiny Air Core]
Elric dusted his hands. "I call that the bait-and-burn combo. Trademark pending."
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Beast 3: Mossback Turtle
Further down a riverbank, a large green-shelled turtle was sunbathing.
"Mossback Turtle," the System chimed. "High defense. Weak to joint attacks. Do not attack the shell."
Elric: "...So we flip it over."
Everyone stared.
He pointed. "I'm serious. If we flip it, the belly's exposed. It's nature logic."
It took teamwork, but after some shouting, pushing, and Glen acting like a bulldozer, they finally rolled it over.
> Mossback Turtle Defeated!
+260 EXP
Loot: [Moss Shell Fragment], [Wet Core], [Turtle Fat]
System: Congratulations, you've gained enough EXP to reach Level 6!
> New Skill Unlocked: [Craft Core I] – Combine beast loot into functional gear or consumables at any rest stop.
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Back to Camp
That night, by the campfire, Elric opened his status.
[Status Window]
Name: Elric
Class: Legendary Shepherd (Locked Skills Remaining)
Level: 6
Skills:
[Shock Pulse I]
[Beast Sense I]
[Craft Core I]
System Points: 42
Inventory: Tuskhorn Hide x2, Rough Core, Wing Membrane, Moss Shell, Turtle Fat…
> System Tip:
You can use [Craft Core I] to make Basic Beast Armor or a Portable Beast Trap.
Rue leaned back. "Not bad for one day."
Glen: "You actually planned well."
Elric: "Of course. I always plan… after the chaos starts."
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Got it! Here's a long and detailed Chapter 26 — Elric and team begin crafting gear using beast loot, explore early dungeon mechanics, and unlock new systems. It includes comedy, game elements, and warm group bonding!
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Chapter 26 – Gears, Greed, and the Glimmering Grotto
The sun barely peeked over the trees, but Elric was already squatting like a goblin over his loot pile.
"Turtle fat. Earth core. Shell bits. It's like my inventory is a stew and nobody gave me a recipe..."
Rue sat across from him, calmly stirring tea. "You could just ask the System."
> System Notification
Would you like to open [Craft Core I] menu?
"Yes, finally. Let's get some fashion."
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[Craft Core I] Menu
Available Recipes (Basic Tier):
1. Tuskhide Vest – +10 Defense, Slight Earth Resistance
Requires: Tuskhorn Hide x2, Rough Earth Core
2. Moss Boots – +5 Speed in forests, Water Resistance
Requires: Moss Shell Fragment x1, Turtle Fat
3. Lightwing Cloak – +5 Evasion, Weak Wind Glide
Requires: Lightwing Membrane x1, Tiny Air Core
> Craft Tuskhide Vest?
Elric slammed confirm. "I shall wear the beast I conquered."
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Crafting Complete!
You created: [Tuskhide Vest]
He held it up proudly. The armor looked rough but surprisingly flexible, dyed a faint earthy brown with thick shoulder padding.
Glen whistled. "Not bad, actually."
Lira: "It suits you. Earthy. Like a pig farmer with ambition."
Rue: "...Compliment?"
Elric strapped it on. "I feel manlier already."
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Exploration Begins
That morning, they followed a newly unlocked System ping:
> Minor Dungeon Detected – Glimmering Grotto
Danger: Low-Moderate
Rewards: Elemental Cores, Beast Eggs, Rare Herbs
Entry Limit: Level 5+
"A dungeon?" Glen's eyes lit up. "Finally."
Lira: "What's the plan?"
Elric opened his arms dramatically. "We loot, we bash, we collect shiny things—and if we die, I blame Glen."
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Inside the Grotto
They entered through a narrow crevice, descending into glowing moss and faint crystal lights. The air was cool, the walls damp. It wasn't dark—but it felt ancient.
> [Dungeon System Activated]
Environmental Boost: Water and Earth Spells +10%
Mini-Boss Detected
Time Limit: 6 Hours
System: Beasts Ahead
Glimstone Mites (Lvl 4-5) – swarm types, weak to light
Croakfang Frogs (Lvl 6) – poison spit, weak to fire
Crystal Drake (Lvl 8) – Mini-Boss
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Battle 1: Glimstone Mites
Tiny sparkling bugs burst from the walls.
"Why do sparkly things always try to kill us?" Lira groaned.
> Elric cast [Shock Pulse I] – AoE electric burst!
The mites fried mid-air. Popcorn.
> +140 EXP
Loot: Shimmer Dust, Bug Eyes, Glimstone Core Fragment
Elric: "System, remind me to sell that dust as glowing powder for romantics."
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Battle 2: Croakfang Frogs
They hit a swampy cavern filled with croaking echoes.
Glen got spat on. "IT'S IN MY MOUTH!"
Rue: "They spit poison."
Elric used the Fire Berry again, lighting it like a torch, then threw it like a molotov cocktail.
WHOOSH
> Croakfang Frogs Defeated!
Loot: Toxic Saliva (ew), Frogskin, Minor Poison Core
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Mini-Boss: Crystal Drake
A low growl echoed through the shimmering hall.
From the shadows stepped a drake covered in glittering blue crystal. It wasn't large, but the raw mana pressure it gave off was intense.
> Crystal Drake – Level 8
HP: 820/820
Element: Ice + Earth
Lira: "We hit it together. Don't let it stall."
> Elric uses [Beast Sense I]
Weakness: Fire, Light
Resist: Water, Physical
"Glen! You punch. Lira, left flank. Rue, light magic. Me? I provide commentary and occasional death."
> Rue casts [Sunburst Flare] – light blast, critical hit!
Elric uses [Shock Pulse I]
*Lira slashes weak point.
Glen punches crystal until his fist bleeds.
Final Hit: Elric throws a crafted Tuskhide spike right into the eye.
> Crystal Drake Defeated!
+520 EXP
Loot: [Drake Crystal Shard], [Lesser Ice Core], [Beast Core (Blue)]
Bonus: Beast Bond Attempt Unlocked
System: Do you wish to bond with the [Beast Core]?
Warning: You are below recommended bonding level (Req: 8)
Elric stared at the glowing blue orb in his hand. "Next level... I'll tame you, little lizard."
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Returning to Camp
Back at their outpost, the group sat around a crackling fire. Tired, sore, and grinning.
Rue: "We made it out alive."
Glen: "Barely."
Lira: "We're stronger now."
Elric opened his System Shop and smirked.
> Shop Items Updated:
Basic Beast Gear Set
Dungeon Key (Common) – 15 SP
Slave Collar (Rank F) – 30 SP
Mystery Egg (Common Beast) – 10 SP
Beast Core Extractor – 25 SP
System Points: 68
New Passive: [Dungeon Explorer I] – +5% loot quality from dungeons
He turned to the group. "Guys, I'm gonna buy a collar."
Lira: "…For what?"
"Elric things."
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Here's Chapter 28 — longer, detailed, and full of progression! We dive into the Verdant Trial Dungeon, unlock new skills, meet a mysterious mentor, and yes—someone does get kidnapped.
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Chapter 28 – The Verdant Trial and the Girl with Silver Eyes
Location: Northern Wildgrove, Verdant Trial Entrance
Lira stared at the moss-covered archway. "This dungeon hasn't been touched in years."
The thick vines pulsed faintly with mana. Carvings of beasts, roots, and ancient warriors glowed along the stone.
> Dungeon: Verdant Trial Grounds
Type: Ruins – Beast Training
Floor Levels: 3
Recommended Level: 6–10
Reward: Skill Orb (Beast Type), Beast Companion Egg (Random)
Danger Rating: Moderate
Entry Fee: 1 Dungeon Key – Common
Elric inserted the key. The runes shimmered green.
System: Warning: Unknown mana signature detected. Probability of surprise events increased.
"Good," Elric muttered. "Surprises make life spicy."
Rue: "You say that now…"
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Floor 1: Whispering Vines
The first floor was a twisted jungle of moving vines, animated roots, and screeching monkey-beasts.
> Beast Identified: Vine Screecher
Rank: E+
Level: 6
Weakness: Fire, Sound Burst
Trait: Lures enemies with illusions
Elric smiled. "Frost, you're up."
The drake flapped up, eyes glowing pale.
> [Frost Puff] activated.
Area Frozen.
Illusions shattered.
> EXP Gained: 42
Item Drop: Beast Core (Screecher), Jungle Root Resin x3
Ding!
> Elric leveled up!
Level: 5 → 6
Skill Unlocked: [Summoner's Call I] – Can call bonded beast to your side instantly.
Shop Unlocked: [Skill Enhancement Token] – 25 SP
Elric: "New skill! Suck it, vines!"
Lira rolled her eyes. "So loud. So proud."
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Halfway In: The Stranger with Silver Eyes
In the center of the second floor, amidst crumbling statues, sat a robed man with long, gray-streaked hair and silver eyes that glowed faintly.
He didn't move as they approached.
Glen raised his sword. "Who the hell are you?"
The man finally looked up. "A failed Shepherd."
Everyone froze.
> System: Warning. This individual once held a version of your Class.
"You're… like me?" Elric asked.
The man smiled. "I was. The beasts didn't listen. The system grew quiet. But you… You're noisy."
Frost growled low, sensing something off.
"You'll reach a point where you must choose," the man whispered. "Bond with beasts—or rule them. You can't do both."
He tossed a glowing scroll toward Elric.
> Item Obtained: [Skill Orb – Beast Type]
Skill: [Command Howl I] – Forces nearby wild beasts below your level to freeze or obey.
Then he vanished.
"Did we just meet my future depression arc?" Elric asked.
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Final Floor: Trial of the Verdant Beast
The last chamber shook as a massive creature emerged from overgrown trees.
> Boss Beast: Verdant Howler – Alpha Wolf Variant
Rank: D+
Level: 10
Traits: Fast, Nature-Affinity, Leader-Type
Elric's heart raced. "We're gonna die."
System: No. We're going to win.
Duel Start.
The battle was chaos—Lira and Glen tanked the beast's charges. Rue used traps. Elric and Frost struck with cold blasts.
But then…
> Alert: Frost HP Critical
Alert: Glen Stunned
Alert: Unknown interference detected.
A dark fog swirled. A scream echoed.
Lira was gone.
> Warning: Lira has been forcibly removed from this zone.
Unknown entity triggered hidden event.
Elric's vision turned sharp.
"Frost—finish this."
> [Frost Merge – Triggered]
Elric's eyes shimmered blue. Cold wind exploded around him.
[Frost Blade] conjured.
Critical Hit!
> Boss Defeated!
EXP: +380
Loot: Beast Egg (Unknown), Nature Core x1, Leaf Cloak
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Chapter End Status
Elric (Level 6)
Bonded Beast: Frost (Level 5)
New Skill: [Summoner's Call I]
Skill Orb Learned: [Command Howl I]
Loot: 1 Beast Egg, 1 Leaf Cloak, 30 SP
Missing Ally: L
Here's Chapter 28 — longer, detailed, and full of progression! We dive into the Verdant Trial Dungeon, unlock new skills, meet a mysterious mentor, and yes—someone does get kidnapped.
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Chapter 28 – The Verdant Trial and the Girl with Silver Eyes
Location: Northern Wildgrove, Verdant Trial Entrance
Lira stared at the moss-covered archway. "This dungeon hasn't been touched in years."
The thick vines pulsed faintly with mana. Carvings of beasts, roots, and ancient warriors glowed along the stone.
> Dungeon: Verdant Trial Grounds
Type: Ruins – Beast Training
Floor Levels: 3
Recommended Level: 6–10
Reward: Skill Orb (Beast Type), Beast Companion Egg (Random)
Danger Rating: Moderate
Entry Fee: 1 Dungeon Key – Common
Elric inserted the key. The runes shimmered green.
System: Warning: Unknown mana signature detected. Probability of surprise events increased.
"Good," Elric muttered. "Surprises make life spicy."
Rue: "You say that now…"
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Floor 1: Whispering Vines
The first floor was a twisted jungle of moving vines, animated roots, and screeching monkey-beasts.
> Beast Identified: Vine Screecher
Rank: E+
Level: 6
Weakness: Fire, Sound Burst
Trait: Lures enemies with illusions
Elric smiled. "Frost, you're up."
The drake flapped up, eyes glowing pale.
> [Frost Puff] activated.
Area Frozen.
Illusions shattered.
> EXP Gained: 42
Item Drop: Beast Core (Screecher), Jungle Root Resin x3
Ding!
> Elric leveled up!
Level: 5 → 6
Skill Unlocked: [Summoner's Call I] – Can call bonded beast to your side instantly.
Shop Unlocked: [Skill Enhancement Token] – 25 SP
Elric: "New skill! Suck it, vines!"
Lira rolled her eyes. "So loud. So proud."
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Halfway In: The Stranger with Silver Eyes
In the center of the second floor, amidst crumbling statues, sat a robed man with long, gray-streaked hair and silver eyes that glowed faintly.
He didn't move as they approached.
Glen raised his sword. "Who the hell are you?"
The man finally looked up. "A failed Shepherd."
Everyone froze.
> System: Warning. This individual once held a version of your Class.
"You're… like me?" Elric asked.
The man smiled. "I was. The beasts didn't listen. The system grew quiet. But you… You're noisy."
Frost growled low, sensing something off.
"You'll reach a point where you must choose," the man whispered. "Bond with beasts—or rule them. You can't do both."
He tossed a glowing scroll toward Elric.
> Item Obtained: [Skill Orb – Beast Type]
Skill: [Command Howl I] – Forces nearby wild beasts below your level to freeze or obey.
Then he vanished.
"Did we just meet my future depression arc?" Elric asked.
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Final Floor: Trial of the Verdant Beast
The last chamber shook as a massive creature emerged from overgrown trees.
> Boss Beast: Verdant Howler – Alpha Wolf Variant
Rank: D+
Level: 10
Traits: Fast, Nature-Affinity, Leader-Type
Elric's heart raced. "We're gonna die."
System: No. We're going to win.
Duel Start.
The battle was chaos—Lira and Glen tanked the beast's charges. Rue used traps. Elric and Frost struck with cold blasts.
But then…
> Alert: Frost HP Critical
Alert: Glen Stunned
Alert: Unknown interference detected.
A dark fog swirled. A scream echoed.
Lira was gone.
> Warning: Lira has been forcibly removed from this zone.
Unknown entity triggered hidden event.
Elric's vision turned sharp.
"Frost—finish this."
> [Frost Merge – Triggered]
Elric's eyes shimmered blue. Cold wind exploded around him.
[Frost Blade] conjured.
Critical Hit!
> Boss Defeated!
EXP: +380
Loot: Beast Egg (Unknown), Nature Core x1, Leaf Cloak
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Chapter End Status
Elric (Level 6)
Bonded Beast: Frost (Level 5)
New Skill: [Summoner's Call I]
Skill Orb Learned: [Command Howl I