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Chapter 9 - Chapter 9: First Commission

The castle bell tolled just before dawn, a deep, sonorous peal that echoed across the sleeping valley. Within the royal forge, Magnus Veyron stood before a sprawling table littered with blueprints, gears, and meticulously labeled brass fittings. His workshop had become a sanctum of steam, steel, and innovation—a crucible where ideas turned into power.

This commission—the redesign of the keep's drawbridge—wasn't just a test of ingenuity. It was a gauntlet thrown by the crown, a silent challenge from every court craftsman who now watched with veiled smiles and thinly veiled envy.

The keep's drawbridge had long been operated by a cumbersome counterweight system requiring dozens of soldiers to raise or lower. The goal: replace it with a steam-powered mechanism operable by no more than two.

Magnus surveyed the current blueprints. He tapped a quill against a sketch of a vertical piston pump. "If we route the pressure from the boiler into twin actuators beneath the gatehouse floor, we can drive the chains upward using hydraulic leverage."

Thoren, ever pragmatic, squinted over his shoulder. "Too much pressure and the chains snap. Too little, and the bridge stays shut. You'll need a regulator—maybe dual-coupling valves with pressure gauges."

Marinus, seated at a drafting station, added, "And what of failsafes? If the boiler cracks or if pressure drops mid-operation…"

"We build a secondary pressure tank," Magnus replied without hesitation. "Insulated, fitted with emergency release. The bridge will lower automatically if anything fails."

The others looked at each other, impressed.

But the real challenge wasn't just mechanical—it was political.

Three days later, the inner courtyard of Castle Grannath buzzed with onlookers. Nobles stood on balconies sipping spiced wine, murmuring behind lace fans and gold-tipped canes. Among them was Master Ezzan, senior architect of the Crown, whose traditional drawbridge system had been installed decades ago.

Ezzan approached Magnus as the crowd gathered.

"A boy from Emberhold dares improve upon my work," Ezzan said, voice like oil on water. "Tell me, will your bridge rise with steam—or ego?"

Magnus smiled politely. "Whichever it takes to cross the moat."

Ezzan's lips twitched, and he walked away.

Magnus turned back to the machine.

Twin iron pistons, freshly cast and gleaming, sat beneath the gatehouse floor. Dozens of feet of insulated piping had been laid through hidden channels. Steam would travel from the boiler to the actuators, where force would be converted into rotary motion and, ultimately, into vertical lift. All of it operated by a single lever and gear switch atop a reinforced control podium.

As Duke Albrecht arrived with his advisors, Magnus nodded to Marinus. "Begin the test."

Marinus pulled the lever.

The boiler hissed.

Steam flooded the actuators with a sound like a dragon breathing.

Slowly, impossibly smoothly, the drawbridge began to rise.

The chains tensed, then moved, the heavy oak span lifting until it stood at a perfect forty-five degrees. A second lever returned it to its original position—quicker this time, as pressure was routed through the auxiliary release valve.

Silence.

Then thunderous applause.

Even Ezzan, grudgingly, offered a nod.

That evening, Duke Albrecht summoned Magnus to the war chamber.

"You've exceeded expectations," the duke said, swirling wine in a goblet. "Your mechanism has cut the bridge operation time in half. More importantly, it's made you a symbol."

Magnus raised an eyebrow. "A symbol?"

"Of the new age," the duke said. "The court speaks of your work with reverence. Merchants want contracts. Nobles want their homes automated. Even the capital's Royal Council has sent emissaries to observe your methods."

Magnus felt the weight settle across his shoulders. "And what do you want, my lord?"

The duke's eyes gleamed. "To see Duras lead the continent in industry. And you—Magnus Veyron—are how we begin."

The next morning, Magnus returned to the royal forge and found a sealed scroll on his workbench.

From the High Chancellor of Ardentis.

It was an invitation to the Grand Symposium of Sciences, held once every five years. Attendance meant prestige, but presenting? That was a declaration of power.

Thoren clapped him on the back. "You're moving fast, lad. Next they'll be calling you the Iron Duke."

Magnus chuckled. "I'll settle for Magnus the Mechanist."

But not everyone was pleased.

In the days that followed the bridge unveiling, Magnus began to notice things. Tools misplaced. Boiler pressure sabotaged. Blueprints disappearing. Once, a support bolt had been loosened—enough to cause a failure if Thoren hadn't spotted it during his inspection.

In the shadows of greatness, envy took root.

One night, as he walked back from the forge, a voice called from the alley near the apothecary.

"Magnus Veyron."

He turned, instinctively stepping into a defensive stance.

A man emerged—a wiry figure with a grizzled beard and ink-stained fingers.

"I'm Jakel," he said. "Once an apprentice to Master Ezzan. He's not fond of you."

"Noted," Magnus said coolly.

Jakel stepped closer. "But I am. I've seen what you build. I want in."

Magnus studied him. "Why tell me this in the dark?"

"Because Ezzan has ears. And I have secrets. Give me a forge and I'll give you designs the court's never seen."

Magnus extended a hand. "Welcome to the forge."

As Jakel joined the team, Magnus's vision began to expand.

More projects. More designs. Clocks powered by condensation, automated water pumps for the lower quarter, mechanical bellows to boost forge efficiency.

But success had a price.

Late one night, his mother waited for him at the family hearth. The fire crackled low. She held a scroll—the High Chancellor's invitation.

"You're soaring," Ada Veyron said, voice soft.

"And?"

"I'm afraid," she admitted. "You were meant to make life better. But now… you talk like nobles. You move like them."

Magnus sat beside her, calloused hands resting on his knees.

"I haven't forgotten who I am," he said.

"But will you remember who they are?" she asked, eyes searching his. "Those who cling to power rarely let go. If you threaten them…"

"I'll outthink them."

She took his hand. "Just don't lose yourself trying to become someone else."

That night, Magnus stood atop the drawbridge, watching the stars flicker over the castle walls. Below, the boilers hissed like serpents, the heartbeats of his machines pulsing through stone and steel.

He had forged iron into motion, steam into might, and his name into legend.

But Ada's words lingered in his mind.

Power was no longer just about machines.

Now—it was about people. About trust. About balance.

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