Smoke curled through the ruined air like the ghost of a thousand French dreams, drifting lazily above shattered stones and blood-stained corpses. The screams had finally quieted, the wounded reduced to distant moans behind barricades now stacked high with the dead. At the heart of this grim scene stood Lieutenant Colonel Lothar von Trotha—young, noble, and already etched into legend by blade and bullet alike.
At twenty-two, his Prussian-blue uniform was heavy with the dust of war, his boots soaked deeply in the blood of friend and foe. His sword, notched and stained, hung loosely at his side, but his spine remained as straight as a cathedral spire. Jaw clenched, pale eyes blazing with fierce delight—he saw war not as mere duty, but as a magnificent game. A beautiful, brutal dance in which he was always victorious.
Yet now even he—arrogant, seasoned, unshakeable—found himself kneeling, heart thundering, breath held in awe as the one called Jen stepped forward. Beside her stood the ethereal presence of her supposed younger brother, Jin, their delicate features unmistakably feminine despite Jen's claim otherwise. Lothar's mind raced with curiosity, confusion, and fascination. To him, it hardly mattered whether they called themselves brothers; he saw clearly two angelic twin sisters, enchanting in their contradictions.
Jen, fierce and commanding, spoke with a voice both sweetly musical and utterly authoritative, her small frame radiating a terrible beauty that inspired instant obedience. Jin, in contrast, glowed softly—an innocent aura of pure, angelic grace that tugged at something deep within Lothar's soul. He felt protective devotion rise sharply in his chest, a desire born of awe at their power and an earnest longing to shelter these divine beings, much like his dear friend's younger sister he had always doted upon—though never before had his heart stirred so fiercely as it did now.
When Jen spoke, the gathered men—officers, battle-hardened veterans, even the proud Lothar himself—listened like devout worshippers receiving the words of a prophet.
"We held the first bridge," Jen declared, her voice calm yet ringing with commanding clarity. "We have spilled their blood, but the enemy will return. Stronger. With greater numbers."
She paused, stepping onto a wooden crate to tower above the commanders despite her diminutive stature. Jin stood quietly behind her, small hands folded neatly, golden hair gleaming in the sunlight like a halo.
"They believe this town will break—that we will flee, exhausted and few. Let them think so. Their arrogance shall be their undoing."
Murmurs rose briefly among the officers, quickly silenced by Jen's firm gesture.
"Colonel Lothar," she called sharply.
He stepped forward immediately, chin raised in eager pride. "Yes, ma'am?"
"Rally the men. Strip every French corpse of weapons, ammunition, powder—anything lethal. I want it cataloged, accounted for, ready for use."
"It will be done," Lothar replied swiftly, his voice strong and fervent.
"Every able-bodied civilian must gather in the church square," she continued, her clear eyes flashing with purpose. "We arm them all—elderly men, boys, women, and girls alike. If they can hold a rifle, they fight. Those who cannot will dig trenches, hammer barricades, fortify our defenses. Every person serves; there are no exceptions."
One captain shifted uneasily, mouth opening to voice objections about involving civilians, but Lothar's fierce, silencing glare instantly froze the words unspoken. Jen pressed on relentlessly.
"Burn the forward positions. Every building, every street corner. Leave them nothing but smoke, ash, and confusion. Let the French believe we have fled. Then we channel them into the northern district, funnel them through narrow streets and tight alleys. And there—we bleed them dry."
Lothar felt a thrill run down his spine, a fierce grin tugging at his lips as he imagined the carnage to come. This plan—brutal, cunning, ruthless—was sheer genius. His heart surged not merely from the prospect of bloodshed but from witnessing such perfect strategic brilliance embodied in the innocent figure before him.
Yes, Lothar thought fervently, these girls were angels indeed—angels of blood, fire, and devastatingly adorable power. And he vowed in his heart, with every fiber of his being, that he would protect and serve them, no matter the cost.
Then Jen turned sharply toward the detailed map pinned to the wall behind her, pressing her delicate finger firmly against it.
"Here—and here," she commanded, her voice clear, precise, yet strangely musical amid the tense silence. "We will construct two fallback lines. Dig deep trenches filled with sharpened stakes. Form narrow, twisting alleys lined with pits and concealed spikes. Convert every window into firing positions, barricade every alleyway, funnel them into specific streets of our choosing—and there, we will bleed them dry."
Her gaze swept the room, ensuring every officer understood the grim intent.
"Ambushes must line every path, every street corner, rigged with explosives and hidden traps. This is no longer conventional warfare; this will be guerrilla fighting. When the French arrive, they will not encounter an organized army—they will step into hell itself. And should the worst happen, we will burn this city to ashes rather than surrender."
A palpable chill rippled through the assembled officers. Lothar alone smiled, captivated by the fierce brilliance of this small commander.
"Lastly," Jen continued firmly, "we require reinforcements. I need a rider—swift, capable, fearless. They must reach our nearest division swiftly, carrying the message of our defiance. Inform them Saarbrücken is bloodied but unbroken. We stand. We hold. And we need their support."
Her piercing gaze fell directly upon Lothar.
"Will you ride, Colonel?"
Without an instant's hesitation, Lothar straightened, pride swelling in his chest.
"No. My place is here, by your side. I will send my fastest and most trustworthy rider—but I shall remain. To defend this town, to defend you both, with my life and beyond."
A flicker of approval appeared in Jen's eyes, while beside her, the other girl—serene and radiant—offered a soft, gentle smile. It filled Lothar's heart with a strange, unholy fervor, an overwhelming desire to shield these divine creatures from harm.
The officers scattered, issuing orders that echoed urgently through the battered streets. Civilians were swiftly pulled from hiding, forced into ranks to prepare defenses. Soon, a fresh pall of smoke rose—this time deliberately ignited, signaling the Prussian resolve and readiness.
Lothar stood alone, observing the fevered preparations, his pulse racing not with fear, but with fervent devotion. He was not merely defending a strategic position; he was fighting for something sacred, for beings who seemed born from myth and miracle.
Turning his gaze reverently toward the two girls—the angels he now lived to protect—he murmured softly, passionately, beneath his breath:
"They are not of this world. Yet I would gladly die a thousand times in this one if it means serving them. So utterly, divinely cute."
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The square outside the old church had never known chaos like this—not in past wars, nor during turbulent revolutions. It was as if madness itself had descended upon the town.
From every shadowed street of the northern quarter, soldiers barked harsh orders, dragging terrified families from homes still standing, herding them roughly toward the church square. Grandfathers limped on trembling legs. Women from the town's single small factory still bore soot in their hair and faces etched with exhaustion. Boys barely past childhood stumbled forward, while girls clutched dolls or kitchen knives with pale, shaking fingers. The healthy, the lame, the blind—none were spared, each prodded by rifle barrels toward the gathering point.
Shouts echoed. Voices cracked. Tears streamed freely. The confusion thickened like smoke from unseen fires.
"What in God's name is this madness?" Private Jürgens muttered, barely twenty himself, eyes wide with disbelief as he pressed a heavy rifle into the frail, trembling hands of a girl who could not have been more than ten.
"She's a seamstress," he whispered desperately to the sergeant beside him, voice tight with disbelief. "A child."
"She's a fighter now," the sergeant answered grimly, eyes hollow, emotionless. "Orders."
"Orders?" Jürgens shook his head bitterly. "Orders from who—a six-year-old girl?"
The sergeant didn't reply, because no reply was possible. It was lunacy, and they all knew it. But it was war—madness had become their reality.
From the line shuffled forward an elderly man, his threadbare coat pinned with faded medals, one eye milky with blindness, a crude stump where his hand had once proudly held a rifle. Jürgens stared at him, stomach churning with the sheer absurdity of it all.
"What next?" he hissed under his breath. "Corpses fitted with bayonets? Dogs trained to throw grenades? Are we arming ghosts now, too?"
But then, suddenly, everything changed.
A hush swept through the crowded square, spreading like ripples across still water. Heads turned in unison, murmurs of surprise rising softly. From the doors of the church came not the heavy stomp of soldiers' boots—but footsteps measured, deliberate, controlled.
And emerging into the sunlight were them:
Lili and the Sergeant.
The two girls, impossibly small and delicate, wore ill-fitting military jackets clearly meant for boys far older and larger. Yet, they moved with an almost regal confidence, each step perfectly synchronized, their golden hair catching sunlight like crowns of divine radiance. Grim-faced soldiers flanked them closely, their eyes blazing not merely with loyalty, but something deeper—devotion bordering on worship.
It was not merely their striking appearance, but something intangible, an aura of quiet power and sacred purpose, that drew the entire square into stunned silence.
A woman gasped softly. A hardened soldier, mouth open, fell involuntarily to one knee.
Lili's lips curled into a gentle, reassuring smile, sweet as a child's innocence. Beside her, the Sergeant offered only a curt, authoritative nod, her gaze piercing the gathered crowd with cool, decisive strength.
In that charged silence, everyone present understood, even if they could not yet believe it fully:
This was no longer mere madness. This was something else—something sacred, something terrifyingly real.
Something worth believing in.
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"Bring the wounded forward," the Sergeant commanded. Her voice was sweet, clear, untouched by fear or doubt. "The broken. The old. The unworthy."
The crowd hesitated, uncertainty flickering briefly through their weary faces—but only for a heartbeat. Then, slowly at first but soon with growing courage, they came forward.
The first was the old war veteran, his remaining arm trembling, his milky, blind eye reflecting only despair and bitterness. His posture spoke volumes: broken by age, forgotten by time.
Lili stepped forward, gentle as morning mist, and placed her small hand softly upon his shoulder.
A faint glow appeared—warm, pure, radiant like sunlight filtering through ancient stained glass.
Before their unbelieving eyes, his missing hand regrew, bone and sinew knitting miraculously into place.
A ripple of astonishment surged through the crowd, building rapidly into a powerful cry of disbelief and joy. They surged forward as one.
An elderly woman, spine bent from a lifetime of labor, gasped as she felt her back straighten and the ache in her bones fade away. A young boy with twisted, clubbed feet stepped forward hesitantly—then began to walk steadily, painlessly, tears streaming down his cheeks. A factory worker, scarred and bitter, watched in awe as fingers crushed and maimed by relentless machinery twisted gently back into perfect shape.
Everywhere, eyes widened in wonder. Tears flowed unchecked.
Amid it all, Lili smiled gently, radiating innocence and compassion. Beside her stood the Sergeant, calm and vigilant, observing not the healed—but the eyes of the soldiers who watched them. She judged silently, measuring the strength and fervor of their newfound faith.
Private Jürgens sank slowly to his knees, his rifle slipping unnoticed from numb fingers. His throat was dry, his voice barely more than a whisper:
"She really is… She's not human… She's…"
"A saint," murmured another soldier, voice hushed in awe.
"An angel," breathed a third.
"No…" a woman corrected, trembling, eyes shining. "She is more."
Then, from somewhere deep within the weary, awestruck crowd, a song began.
At first, it was quiet, a single frail voice—perhaps an elderly woman recalling a hymn from her distant childhood—rising hesitantly into the smoke-filled air. It trembled faintly, barely audible above the distant crackle of burning buildings. But it persisted, a fragile flame in the darkness:
"Ein feste Burg ist unser Gott,
Ein gute Wehr und Waffen..."
("A mighty fortress is our God,
A trusty shield and weapon...")
The notes resonated through the square—an old Lutheran hymn, heavy with history, steeped in generations of faith, defiance, and hope. It was a song of survival, a song of resilience born centuries ago, sung by ancestors who faced wars and plagues and famine, whose strength came not from weapons alone, but from belief itself.
Soon, other voices joined—tentatively at first, but quickly growing in confidence. A soldier, battle-scarred and weary, his voice raw with emotion, picked up the melody, lending it strength. Then came a factory worker, soot-stained and trembling. Mothers holding their children began to sing softly, steadily, rising louder and clearer.
*"Er hilft uns frei aus aller Not,
Die uns jetzt hat betroffen..."*
("He helps us free from every need
That now has overtaken us...")
The song swelled with power and reverence, spreading like flame across the square. Men, women, and children—young and old, strong and frail—sang out as one, their voices mingling, intertwining in harmony. Tears streaked faces, shoulders straightened with newfound pride, fists clenched around rifles and knives, held now not in fear but defiance.
Yet, as the hymn reached its peak, new verses spontaneously emerged—lyrics born from the hearts of those who had witnessed miracles with their own eyes. The ancient words shifted gently, reverently, from praise of divine providence to something closer, something tangible:
"Zwei Engel kamen uns zur Wehr,
Im blut'gen Rauch und Feuer,
Zwei Schwestern heilig, stark und rein,
Sind unsere Schutz und Mauer."
("Two angels came to our defense,
Through bloody smoke and fire,
Two sisters holy, strong, and pure,
Are now our shield and tower.")
Eyes turned toward Lili and the Sergeant as voices rose even higher, fervent and reverent, filled with gratitude and awe. The hymn had transformed into a new anthem—a declaration of faith not only in God but in these mysterious children who had walked among them, healing wounds and reigniting hope.
Private Jürgens felt his chest tighten, tears freely spilling down his cheeks. Beside him, even hardened veterans sang, voices trembling as they offered this spontaneous devotion, born not of fear, but of sincere faith and wonder.
Some recalled old stories whispered by their grandparents, folk tales of Valkyries—those warrior maidens of ancient Norse myth who carried fallen heroes to Valhalla. Could it be, they wondered, that these two girls were indeed divine messengers, Valkyries sent from realms unseen?
But it didn't matter from where they had come—only that they were here, standing before them, radiant and real, bringing victory from ruin.
As the final notes soared heavenward, fading gently into silence, a profound stillness settled upon the square, deeper and more sacred than before.
This was no longer mere obedience. This was belief—pure, fervent, and undeniable.
A young child, no older than eight, raised her tiny hand toward the rifles. Her father hesitated, pale and shaken—but then he saw Lili, standing in that aura of light, and nodded solemnly, proudly.
Even the children would fight—for her. For them.
Jen turned to Lothar, who stood at the edge of the scene, captivated, heart racing wildly with devotion and awe.
"This town will not fall," she said firmly, confidently, her gaze piercing his soul. "Not while they believe."
Lothar snapped a sharp salute, pulse quickening, his voice thick with reverence:
"We will hold it in your name, my lady—until the end."
At that moment, the great church bells began to ring—not in celebration, nor in sorrow—but as a fierce, holy summons. A call to arms, majestic and terrifying, resonating deeply within every heart.
Saarbrücken had been reborn—not merely in war, but in faith. Its streets would now become sacred ground.
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The cheers still echoed in the square, waves of joyous defiance crashing against stone buildings, rifles raised skyward, and voices lifting praises not just to the Fatherland but to the two radiant children who had transformed despair into fervent hope.
Yet amid the thunderous celebration, Lili gently tugged at the Sergeant's sleeve, her delicate fingers insistent.
The Sergeant turned, her sharp gaze still sweeping the crowd—calculating, assessing every risk, every possibility.
"What is it?" she asked softly, distracted but gentle.
Lili didn't reply immediately. Her solemn, wide blue eyes weren't watching the cheering throng. Instead, they were fixed firmly, earnestly upon the Sergeant's face, as if nothing else in the world existed.
"They keep calling us sisters," Lili whispered hesitantly. "They call us girls…but we keep lying. Saying we're boys. Saying we're Jin and Jen. But we're not them. We're not boys."
At those quiet words, the Sergeant froze completely, the jubilant chaos around her abruptly falling away. Lili's innocent voice, pure and earnest, struck deeper into her heart than any cannon shell or blade ever could.
"We should tell them who we really are," Lili continued gently, squeezing the Sergeant's sleeve tighter. "Lying is bad, right? Mother always told me so. And it also feels bad. It's something bad people and bullies do—isn't it?"
The Sergeant opened her mouth to reply, but no sound emerged. A strange, foreign feeling tightened in her throat, robbed her of words.
For the first time, she truly saw Lili—not merely as a useful ally or as a tool of survival—but as she genuinely was. A girl, small and sweet, with soft golden hair and eyes that held a quiet, holy glow. A girl whose delicate hand clung trustingly to her sleeve, who had given everything to follow her into hell, who had offered up part of her very self to save her life. A girl who had changed everything—everything she understood about herself, about the world, about the very nature of love and sacrifice.
Something deep within her—something that had long been frozen and hardened by the harshness of a brutal, uncaring future—began slowly, achingly, to thaw.
She wasn't a Sergeant anymore. Not here. Not in this strange new world. Not in this small, fragile body.
And she wasn't a man.
She wasn't Jin.
She was… a girl.
A sister.
The idea felt surprisingly warm and welcome. She imagined it, quietly, carefully, allowing herself the comfort of the thought: being Lili's twin sister instead of a brother. Being her protector, yes, but also something softer, kinder. To have a bond deeper than mere alliance or strategy—a bond of family, born of blood and heart, pure and true.
She couldn't help but smile gently at the thought. Yes, she liked that idea. It felt… right, despite everything she had ever believed about herself.
Then, like an echo from a long-forgotten past, a name drifted gently into her consciousness. Her own mother's name, distant yet painfully vivid.
*Tanya.*
That was it. It fit her new self perfectly, carried a softness and strength together in one word. Perhaps, just perhaps, she could take that name, claim it as her own—not just in her mother's memory, but in honor of everything her mother had stood for: strength, courage, love.
With this quiet revelation warming her heart, she surrendered at last to the gentle truth held in Lili's earnest gaze. She knelt slightly, taking the girl's small, delicate hand in her own and squeezing it softly, reverently.
"You're right," she finally whispered, her voice trembling with emotions she could scarcely recognize. "No more pretending."
She met Lili's eyes, her own gaze now filled with newfound determination and gentle affection.
"My name…is Tanya," she said softly, the name feeling sweet and strange on her tongue, yet undeniably true. "Your sister, now and always."
And as she spoke these words, the final walls around her heart collapsed quietly, irrevocably. She was Tanya now—and she was not alone.
Tanya turned toward the crowd, still caught in the rapture of cheering voices and uplifted rifles, their hymn-like chants echoing through the square.
She stepped forward decisively, raising her small hand to call for silence.
Slowly, respectfully, the noise faded, until a reverent hush settled over the gathered faces—soldiers, townsfolk, the old and the young—all watching with rapt attention.
"I am not Jen," she said clearly, her voice now gentle yet ringing with authority, like the echo of a church bell after Sunday mass. "And I am not a sergeant. And," she added softly, almost playfully, "I am certainly not a boy—though I doubt any of you still believed that."
She glanced down at Lili beside her, the gentleness in her eyes unmistakable.
"This girl—this sweet, perfect girl—is my sister. Her name is Lili. And I…am Tanya."
She paused briefly, allowing her words to sink deeply into the silence, before lifting both their joined hands high into the air.
"We are twin sisters," Tanya declared with newfound strength. "We have no family name, but we are bound by blood, fate, and purpose. Sent not by kings or generals, but by something far greater—something divine. We stand here now to protect you, to fight alongside you, and to cherish you—so long as you remain good, faithful, and just."
The silence lingered, heavy and stunned—just for a moment.
Then, as if a spark had caught dry tinder, the crowd exploded in joyous, thunderous cheers.
Their voices rose, raw and uncontained, chanting passionately:
"Lili! Tanya! Lili! Tanya!"
Their names echoed through the square, more than mere cries of admiration—these were prayers now, lifted fervently toward the heavens. Soldiers raised their rifles high, not as mere military salutes, but as joyous declarations of faith. Some fell to their knees, overcome with emotion. Mothers clutched their children tightly, tears streaming down faces etched with gratitude and awe.
In that instant, all doubts vanished.
No one questioned the madness of placing weapons in the hands of children, nor the miracles they'd witnessed, nor even the brutal reality of the war engulfing them.
Because now they believed.
Believed not just in victory or survival, but in something far deeper, far more profound.
They believed in them.
As the townspeople surged to their posts, hastily preparing for the inevitable, brutal French assault to come, Lili leaned gently into Tanya's side, a quiet smile lighting her delicate features.
"You called me your little sister," she whispered, her voice soft and filled with warmth.
Tanya looked down at her, a rare smile gracing her lips, tinged with gentle amusement and something else—a tender, protective affection that felt entirely new, yet entirely right.
"Well… you are," Tanya answered gently, squeezing Lili's hand with a newfound confidence. "And I'm proud to be your big sister."
In that moment, as distant drums thundered ominously and bells tolled again—this time as a call to war—it was not fear that surged through the streets of Saarbrücken.
It was faith.
Faith in Lili and Tanya.
And Tanya knew, better than anyone, how powerful—and dangerous—such faith could become. She had seen it wielded as a weapon in another time, another world. Now, standing beside her newfound sister, she was determined to wield it herself.
Whatever it took, whatever the cost—she would use that faith to win.
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From the hilltop overlooking Saarbrücken, the French commanders watched in stunned silence.
Smoke billowed skyward in thick, choking columns, rising from the northern district like a sacrificial pyre, darkening the horizon. Even from this distance, they could hear the sinister crackle of flames consuming buildings—homes, shops, the everyday lives of a city set aflame. Faint but unmistakable were the distant cries of terrified townspeople fleeing or trapped within the inferno.
General Frossard peered through his spyglass, his knuckles whitening around its brass casing. They're burning their own city... he thought, bewildered, struggling to grasp the madness before him.
Behind him, aides and junior officers murmured anxiously, exchanging nervous glances. Journalists scribbled feverishly into notebooks, barely containing their excitement as they captured the dramatic spectacle. One correspondent whispered to another in breathless tones, "The desperate Prussians—setting fire to their own defeat..."
But Frossard wasn't so certain.
An officer lowered his telescope, confusion etched deeply across his brow. "General," he stammered, disbelief coloring his voice, "they're... pulling back. Sir, they're abandoning their forward defenses."
It was true. Through shifting curtains of smoke, shadowy Prussian figures retreated deeper into the maze-like streets of Saarbrücken. No artillery thundered. No rifles fired. The defenders simply vanished, melting away behind clouds of ash and ruin.
Atop his gleaming white horse, young Prince Louis-Napoléon laughed triumphantly, his voice echoing across the hillside with reckless joy. His youthful face flushed with excitement, eyes blazing, he lifted his sword high into the smoky air.
"Do you see, General?" he cried out, his voice ringing with wild enthusiasm. "They flee before us! They have no stomach for true war! Like rats, they burn their nest and scatter! Now is our chance—attack before they escape!"
General Frossard flinched at those words, uncertainty coiling tightly within his chest.
"Yes... perhaps," he murmured softly, almost to himself, his mind suddenly filled with dark memories and old lessons.
He recalled another city ablaze. Another army retreating.
Russia. Napoleon. The Grand Armée, lured onward by burning towns and scorched fields, only to find a smoldering, empty Moscow and defeat lurking in the flames. History whispered a bitter warning in his ear.
"Sir?" Major Brebis prompted anxiously. "Your orders?"
But Frossard hesitated, his jaw tightening. Could this be the same cunning tactic? Could these devils truly be sacrificing their homes just to lure him into their trap?
Behind him, the burning stares of journalists felt hotter than the flames engulfing Saarbrücken below. They waited, pens poised, ready to record his every action—his courage or his cowardice, his decisiveness or hesitation. To waver now might cost him not merely the battle, but his reputation and legacy as well.
Yet to charge blindly into that inferno...
Then came the sudden pounding of hoofbeats.
Frossard jerked his head upward just in time to see Prince Louis-Napoléon spur his white steed forward, cloak streaming behind him like a banner of imperial glory.
"FOR FRANCE!" the boy-prince roared, charging recklessly toward the bridges, his youthful voice igniting the hearts of thousands.
A thunderous cry erupted from the ranks, a fervor so infectious it spread like wildfire among the troops.
Before Frossard could utter even a single order of caution, commands already echoed through the ranks.
"Fix bayonets!"
"Forward! Charge the town!"
Thousands surged toward the river, into curtains of heat and swirling smoke. Blinded and choked, they pressed forward regardless, believing their enemy broken, convinced victory was finally within grasp.
But hidden behind those flames, shrouded by smoke and darkness, the Prussians waited.
In alleys and rooftops, behind shattered windows and barricaded doors, eyes watched unblinking, rifles ready. Tripwires stretched silently across narrow streets, gunpowder barrels lay buried beneath cobblestones, glass bottles filled with kerosene waited to rain fiery death from above. Bayonets glinted ominously as steady hands remained poised, ready for slaughter.
The Prussians had not retreated.
They had invited their enemy closer.
And now, the French charged straight into their embrace.
The trap was sprung.