Hello everyone, I would like to inform you that I have been thinking about rewriting — or creating a new version — of this fanfic with better planning and structure.
The main reason for this decision is that this project originally served as a way to develop my writing style and experiment with the process of creating a fanfic and organizing my ideas. However, during the writing process, I ended up adding many spontaneous ideas without planning or finishing them completely, especially regarding plot points or scenes from previous chapters. This caused the story to deviate from my initial vision and become somewhat empty, so to speak.
When I decided to write this fanfic, it was as a way to pass the time, so some people may have noticed that parts of it have elements of other fanfics, with some adjustments either in the content or in the writing style. Because of this, many times some inconsistencies or extreme opinions appeared, either because I left the original opinion because I found it funny or because I couldn't think of what to change.
Another consequence of this was that Tenshin's character, and the things around him, didn't turn out as planned. Just to give you an idea, before I started writing the fanfic itself, I spent about a week planning out some details.
So when creating Tenshin (whose name means "heavenly innocence" or "heavenly truth," while "Satoru" means "understanding" or "enlightenment"), I intended his personality to be a mix of Caster Gilgamesh, Satoru Gojo, and Arthur Pendragon (from FATE). From Gilgamesh and Gojo, I wanted to incorporate cynicism, self-confidence, pride, and intellectual (IQ) and battle (EQ) intelligence — along with Gojo's relaxed and confident demeanor as a "mask" to avoid drawing attention to himself. As for Arthur, I wanted to bring a sense of moral code, honor, and a regal attitude to contrast with Gilgamesh's.
Also, I initially tried to avoid making Tenshin too powerful. However, without realizing it, I ended up taking it too far—whether it was in relation to the Celestial Library, Tenshin's abilities, martial soul, etc. And even when I wrote or planned a power-up, I would soon unconsciously do the opposite, either as a consequence or at the price, and end up nerfing Tenshin.
Also, during the writing process, I ended up adding a lot of spontaneous ideas without planning or finishing them completely, especially regarding plot points or scenes from previous chapters. This caused the story to deviate from my initial vision and become somewhat empty, so to speak.
So I consider this fanfic to be more of an experiment and a way to improve my writing style, and besides, all the chapters were written before the beginning of March. Now that I have a clearer direction, along with feedback from you, the readers, and my own refined ideas, I believe I can rewrite this fanfic with a much stronger and more cohesive story.
I appreciate your understanding and continued support.
April 10, 2025
NOTE: There are still a few chapters to come out. Before making this decision, I had already written 31 chapters, drafted chapter 32, and written a scene for future chapters. If it wouldn't be too much trouble, I would like you, the readers, to read all the remaining chapters and give me feedback so that I can take it into account in the new version of the fanfic.