Howdy folks, just wanted to give an update into why there was no chapter for this week, and where it went
Firstly, I had an important midterm that I spent most of the week nonstop studying for, so that's the main reason I couldn't get something out. Secondly, there were some major changes I've been working on, and I'm proud to announce that Chapter 1: The First Layer has received several changes. Firstly, the name of the main character and some other characters have been changed. The changes are as follows:
Main Character: John -> Zander
Main Character's Brother: Jerry -> Kim Jiwoo (will be referred to as Jiwoo)
John was always a bit of a placeholder name, and as for Jerry, I looked into Korean naming schemes and wanted to make the name feel more original, as well as emphasizing their role as an adopted brother, and as an Asian American, as that's going to be a decent amount of their identity. I've put a lot more thought into newer characters, and the names I had for some of the main characters needed a change to fit with Matsuo or Remus Black, or the Strollos. I know they've only been mentioned once (now twice), but it's an important change. These changes are throughout all chapters.
The second big round of changes is in the first chapter is the addition of an entirely new section. This is pretty important towards worldbuilding and it introduces Zander and his background before the layers, so I recommend you go check it out and re-read the first half of the chapter. After the break in the text, not much has been changed.
That's all for now. These changes took a bit with my midterm and all, but I'm working right now towards getting another chapter out by Friday. See you then!
GO BACK AND READ THE FIRST CHAPTER WOOO HOOO YIPPEEEEE YAYYYYY