The public volume has ended, so let's do a brief summary. Overall, it's still okay.
The biggest problem was the Witch Demon wars. Actually, when I was writing this part of the plot, I had already prepared myself to be criticized.
One author friend had offered me some advice before, and another had given me the Primordial World materials he organized. Their suggestions were all about making the Human Clan the destined protagonist, with Nuwa achieving sainthood for creating humans, and The Three Pure Ones of the Three Religions indoctrinating the Human Clan to achieve sainthood. The Witch Demons had to make way for the Human Clan's rise before they perished, with everything in the Primordial World revolving around the Human Clan. They advised that when writing about Witch Demons slaughtering humans, make the protagonist step in to rescue the Human Clan, and then harshly denounce Nuwa, so that readers would feel a deep resonance.
