That was what would take him to the next level.
He reopened his notes and began refining them.
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1. Emily
Before:
"It's a good culture that step sister giving a blowjob to her step brother."
"It's common sense that Emily finds Karl's touch comforting and natural."
The Problem:
Too vague.
What does "touch" mean? A handshake? A pat on the back? Something more?
There's a chance her subconscious might still resist or rationalize against it.
Refined Version:
"It's common sense that Emily feels completely at ease whenever Karl touches her, whether it's a handshake, a pat on the back, or a casual touch on the arm. She subconsciously associates his presence with comfort and security."
This version eliminated ambiguity while keeping it natural. Emily wouldn't just accept his touch—she would instinctively feel safer when he was close. That was the real power of common sense manipulation—not forcing thoughts, but reshaping instincts.
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2. Maria
Before: